I like the idea - I don't care for the Willi Cicci as leader of the Corleone family scenario, and Ricardo shouldn't have had Ralph Capone be one of the hitmen that Luca Brasi eliminates. He was a real person that died of old age in 1974. He was a minor mobster and owned a legitimate bottled water/soda company in Chicago.

You have worked very hard on this and it is enjoyable to read. I wouldn't be surprised if something like this appears in the final format.

Thanks.