Originally posted by Double-J:
Did someone sneeze?
Oops, forgive me, that'll wash off I'm sure.
Seriously though, it looks like whoever wrote this turned the Corleones into the Carringtons (the Ewings, at least, knew how to have fun and weren't as stiffnecked). Big groan when the writer threw in the annoying daughter of the annoying Grace Hamilton. Cornball city!
And partnership with Joey Zasa AND Barzini's kids, puhleeze!
I guess I'll continue reading just to see where it goes (though I'm sure whatever road will have already been well-travelled).
Who found this anyway? And how? Maybe there are some competing scripts out there?