Originally posted by Ricardo:
...Perhaps a deleted Scene or two would have made GF3 better...
Rephrase:
Perhaps deleting a Scene or two would have made GF3 better. But probably not.
Another rephrase:
Perhaps rewriting a scene or two..or three..would have made GF3 MUCH better. Maybe.
One more time:
Perhaps rewriting the entire film would have made GF# SO much better.
Apple