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Re: More Bad Writing in III
[Re: Sonny_Black]
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06/21/10 08:53 PM
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He couldn't get his lucky coat off of the hook?!! He deserved to be shot. How about...."COMMAND ME!" Vincent says it and so does Calo. It sounds too forced, pretentious or phony. It should be followed by, "Bark like a dog!"
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Re: More Bad Writing in III
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06/22/10 11:17 AM
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How about...."COMMAND ME!" Vincent says it and so does Calo. It sounds too forced, pretentious or phony. It should be followed by, "Bark like a dog!" "Pee on me, Don Corleone. Please."
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Re: More Bad Writing in III
[Re: Mark]
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06/22/10 02:10 PM
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"I dread you." WTF?!? Kay had 20 + years to think of a zinger to "Bazinga" Michael and that's all she comes up with?!? Maybe she wanted to have Michael get a Rastafarian do.
"Io sono stanco, sono imbigliato, and I wan't everyone here to know, there ain't gonna be no trouble from me..Don Corleone..Cicc' a port!"
"I stood in the courtroom like a fool."
"I am Constanza: Lord of the idiots."
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Re: More Bad Writing in III
[Re: Sonny_Black]
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06/24/10 07:48 AM
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But he was already taking pills in part II. You see this when he is sitting in the train to Miami. True, but we don't know what the pills were for. I always assumed they were Valium, or something like it. In any case, developing diabetes later in life isn't uncommon, so I don't think there's any inconsistency here. Speaking of attacks on GFIII, there was a pretty good line on Sportscenter this morning. They were showing highlights of the record-long match at Wimbledon (continuing this morning for day 3, 59-59 in the 5th set). After one highlight, the anchor tried to put the length into perspective by saying, "At this point in the match, you could have watched The Godfather and Godfather II. As for Godfather III...well, who wants to watch that, anyway."
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Re: More Bad Writing in III
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06/24/10 10:05 AM
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Michael diabetic probably came on as he got older as there is nothing in GF 1 and 2 showing he had diabetics or its more sloppy writing.. Michael showed signs of oncoming diabetes in I. Notice that he drank an excssive amount of water, which is a symptom/
"Io sono stanco, sono imbigliato, and I wan't everyone here to know, there ain't gonna be no trouble from me..Don Corleone..Cicc' a port!"
"I stood in the courtroom like a fool."
"I am Constanza: Lord of the idiots."
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Re: More Bad Writing in III
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06/24/10 01:16 PM
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Michael diabetic probably came on as he got older as there is nothing in GF 1 and 2 showing he had diabetics or its more sloppy writing.. Michael showed signs of oncoming diabetes in I. Notice that he drank an excssive amount of water, which is a symptom/ Excessive?
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Re: More Bad Writing in III
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06/26/10 11:04 AM
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... Notice that he drank an excssive amount of water, which is a symptom/ Is this in addition to the 'heavy smoking'??? I haven't viewed GFII in a while, will have to check out the next time for how many times we see Michael Corleone with a glass of water in front of him. Which of course, would indicate 'excessive' drinking of same. The diabetes in GFIII was most likely written in as another way of having the older Michael come off as more weak and vulnerable, nearer the end of his effective reign as 'Don'. And I agree that it was no more than aspirin he was downing on that train in GFII.
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Re: More Bad Writing in III
[Re: dontomasso]
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07/01/10 12:25 PM
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He's always drinking water. Before his cooking lesson with Clemenza. On the train. With Fredo while Fredo has a banana daquari. At the meeting with Batista. Well, you've got a point there...any character seen excessively drinking water (or club soda) at least FOUR times, in two movies covering a 13 year timespan has GOT to be interpreted as 'pre-diabetic'!! He does ask Al for cold water upon returning from Cuba...I'm not sure if he drinks any, just soothes his eyes. But still, he ASKS for the water...does that count? I think it should. What about the deleted scenes...we've GOT to see if Michael's drinking water (or club soda) in any of the deleted scenes because just anything we can find will further prove the theory!!! (By the way, weren't there pitchers/glasses of water in front of most of the attendees at the Batista meeting...as there would be a almost any similar gathering of businessmen in a boardroom? -- Another thing I'll have to check out during next GFII viewing.)
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Re: More Bad Writing in III
[Re: AppleOnYa]
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07/01/10 12:32 PM
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(By the way, weren't there pitchers/glasses of water in front of most of the attendees at the Batista meeting...as there would be a almost any similar gathering of businessmen in a boardroom? -- Another thing I'll have to check out during next GFII viewing.) Clearly thy were ALL pre-diabetics.
"Io sono stanco, sono imbigliato, and I wan't everyone here to know, there ain't gonna be no trouble from me..Don Corleone..Cicc' a port!"
"I stood in the courtroom like a fool."
"I am Constanza: Lord of the idiots."
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