I took a brief look at everyone's roster, and here is my quick analysis:

Bam: Flawed roster. Needs backups. SP above average. RP 'OK'.

DB: Average offense. Good SP and RP. Will probably be a contender with some tweaking.

Bedroom Bombers: Only has 10 position players. Roster will need major work.

God's Offal: Lots of offense, little pitching.

Yogi: Good offense. Average SP. Awful RP.

Yao's: Good offense, but missing backups at several positions. Slightly below average SP. A couple of good RP's, and a couple bad ones.

J.G.: Good offense. Questionable SP after Lincecum. Questionable RP.

Cruise Control: Good offense, but needs some backups. Questionable SP. Poor RP.

BL: Good offense. Lot of big question marks in SP. RP average with some question marks too.