I'm still in the draft process but I want some opinions on it please.

Chapter One
"Fucking bastard," Bobby Schulman muttered as he seen known a drug dealer entering a black Benz, and watching it pull off. He quickly shrugged it off as he entered the New York Supreme Court.

The architecture of the Supreme Court never ceased to amaze Bobby. Being on the force for over 12 years, and he still got confused on where to go when entering this "puzzle house."

"You see Judge Clifford, Ernie?" Bobby asked, showing his NYPD credentials to the retired NYPD officer to his right.

"Yeah, he just acquitted that drug dealer, what's his name," Court officer Ernie Boyd replied; taking a sip of his cold coffee. "Best bet is he's in his chambers."

Bobby stopped at the small convenience store behind Ernie Boyd's post; buying a pack of Camel cigarettes, before making his way to the elevator. He observed as he walked, locking eyes with a gorgeous woman. 'Probably on jury duty' he thought, walking on to the elevator and pressing four.

It felt like forever due to the elevator stopping at every floor between one and four. He got off and made his way to the chambers.

Judge Theodore Roosevelt in gold inscripted letters read on the door. Knocking on the wood, he slowly opened the door. Judge Theodore Roosevelt, or Teddy as his friends known him, sat behind his desk smoking a half-finished cigarette, with Marvin Gaye's "I Heard It Through The Grapevine" playing on his mini stereo system.

"Teddy, what's up?" Bobby asked, taking a seat across from the middle-aged man.

No matter how many times Bobby visited Teddy which was often, he never seemed to age though he was 53 years old.